¹«·á ·¹º§Å×½ºÆ® ¹Þ°í °­»çÆò°¡ ³²±â¸é 1,OOO¿ø ÄíÆù Áï½Ã Àû¸³!

Ȥ½Ã »çÀÌÆ®¿¡¼± ãÁö ¸øÇÑ ±Ã±ÝÇÑ Á¡ÀÌ ÀÖÀ¸¼¼¿ä?
³²°ÜÁֽŠÀ̸ÞÀÏÀ» ÅëÇØ ´äº¯ µå¸®°Ú½À´Ï´Ù.

¹®ÀÇÇϽг»¿ëÀÌ ¹®ÀÚ·Î ¹ß¼ÛµÇ¿À´Ï
¿¬¶ôó¸¦ ³²°ÜÁÖ¼¼¿ä.
¾÷¹«½Ã°£ ¿ù~±Ý ¿ÀÀü9½Ã~¿ÀÈÄ6½Ã
(Á¡½É½Ã°£ ³·12½Ã~¿ÀÈÄ1½Ã)

¿µÀÛ±³Á¤ °Ô½ÃÆÇ

¿µ¾î ¸»Çϱâ¿Í ¾²±â¸¦ µ¿½Ã¿¡ Àâ´Â´Ù!

ÀڽŠÀÖ°Ô ¾µ ¼ö ÀÖ´Â ¿µÀÛ¹®À» À§ÇØ ÆÄ¿öÀ×±Û¸®½¬ ¼ö¾÷À» ¼ö°­ÇϽôÂ
ȸ¿ø´Ôµé²² ¹«·á·Î Á¦°øÇص帮´Â ºÎ°¡ ¼­ºñ½º·Î, Àü¹® ºÐ¾ß¸¦ Á¦¿ÜÇÑ ÀÚÀ¯ ÁÖÁ¦
¶Ç´Â °­»ç´ÔÀÌ ³»Áֽô °úÁ¦¸¦ ȸ¿ø´Ô²²¼­ ¿µ¾î·Î ÀÛ¼ºÇØÁֽøé,
´ã´ç °­»ç ´Ô²²¼­ ¡®¹®¹ý ¿À·ù ±³Á¤¡¯ °ú ¡®´õ ³ªÀº ¿µ¾î½Ä Ç¥Çö¡¯À¸·Î ±³Á¤ÇØÁÖ´Â
¼­ºñ½º ÀÔ´Ï´Ù.

The season now in my country

ÀÛ¼ºÀÚ: ¼Û*¿ì
2023-06-02 3713

ȸ¿ø´ÔÀÇ ¿µÀÛ¹®

It is lovely spring now in Korea. It is cool as well as hot in the daytime, but at night it is cool and a little cold. But I feel it is too hot in the daytime because I usually sweat a lot even though it is not too hot. Actually this season is so beautiful because we can see green leaves and beautiful flowers wherever we go, winter is much better to me. Nowadays I like evening more than daytime.

°­»ç´ÔÀÇ Ã·»è±³Á¤ ³»¿ë

Hi Scott!

Happy weekend! Great answer on your homework! Take care ^^

T. DON

It is lovely spring now in Korea. It is cool as well as hot in the daytime, but at night it is cool and a little cold. But I feel it is too hot in the daytime because I usually sweat a lot even though it is not too hot. Actually this season is so beautiful because we can see green leaves and beautiful flowers wherever we go, winter is much better to me. Nowadays I like evening more than daytime.
>> It is a lovely spring now in Korea. It is cool as well as hot in the daytime, but at night it is cool and a little cold. But I feel it is too hot in the daytime because I usually sweat a lot even though it is not too hot. Actually this season is so beautiful because we can see green leaves and beautiful flowers wherever we go, winter is much better to me. Nowadays I like evening more than daytime.
¹øÈ£ Á¦¸ñ ±Û¾´ÀÌ °ø°³ »óÅ µî·ÏÀÏ Á¶È¸¼ö
126035 homework ¹Ú*¹Î ¿Ï·á 2023-02-27 4
126034 Monday Homework ·ù*¿ì ¿Ï·á 2023-02-27 1428
126033 Essay ¼Û*¹Î ¿Ï·á 2023-02-27 0
126032 Homework ¹Ú*¹Î ¿Ï·á 2023-02-27 1399
126031 Lesson 12 ; Homework ±è*Çý ¿Ï·á 2023-02-27 1795
126030 collecting ¹Î*Á¤ ¿Ï·á 2023-02-27 1
126029 What are some reasons why Western people live a \'YOLO\' life... ±è*Áø ¿Ï·á 2023-02-27 2
126028 What is your favorite movie soundtrack? Why do you like it? Àü*¿¬ ¿Ï·á 2023-02-27 0
126027 My trip ¹Î*Á¤ ¿Ï·á 2023-02-27 1
126026 Homework ÇÔ*ÁÖ ¿Ï·á 2023-02-27 1
126025 Do you think change is important in people\'s life? Àü*¿¬ ¿Ï·á 2023-02-27 0
126024 homework Æí*¿¬ ¿Ï·á 2023-02-27 1
126023 My opinion regarding bullying ±è*Áö ¿Ï·á 2023-02-27 1777
126022 Homework ±Ç*¹Ì ¿Ï·á 2023-02-27 1
126021 homework ä*¼­ ¿Ï·á 2023-02-27 1738
126020 homework ä*¼­ ¿Ï·á 2023-02-27 1472
126019 homework ä*¼­ ¿Ï·á 2023-02-27 1423
126018 homework ä*¼­ ¿Ï·á 2023-02-27 1455
126017 Young people these days, do not enjoy family gatherings. What do... Àå*±Ô ¿Ï·á 2023-02-27 1543
126016 I sometimes make food. ¿À*Çõ ¿Ï·á 2023-02-27 104

HOW TO USE IT?

[¸¶ÀÌÆäÀÌÁö > ¼ö¾÷ ³»¿ë º¸±â > ÇнÀ ͏°´õ > ¿µÀÛ±³Á¤ ¹öư Ŭ¸¯]

¼ö¾÷ Ƚ¼ö¸¸Å­ ¿µÀÛ±³Á¤ °Ô½ÃÆÇÀÌ »ý¼ºµÇ¸ç,
Áö³­ ³¯Â¥¿¡µµ °Ô½Ã ÇÒ ¼ö ÀÖ½À´Ï´Ù.

ÁÖ5ȸ ¼ö¾÷ : ¿ù 20ȸ ÀÌ¿ë °¡´É
ÁÖ3ȸ ¼ö¾÷ : ¿ù 12ȸ ÀÌ¿ë °¡´É
ÁÖ2ȸ ¼ö¾÷ : ¿ù 08ȸ ÀÌ¿ë °¡´É
01
±³Á¤ ³»¿ëÀº ÃÖ´ë 1,000byte±îÁö ¿Ã¸± ¼ö ÀÖ½À´Ï´Ù.

÷ºÎ ÆÄÀÏÀº ¿øÈ°ÇÑ Ã·»èÀ» À§ÇÑ Âü°íÀÚ·á·Î »ç¿ëµÉ »Ó,
ÆÄÀÏ¿¡ ´ëÇÑ Ã·»èÀº ºÒ°¡´É ÇÕ´Ï´Ù.

¾÷·Îµå °¡´ÉÇÑ Ã·ºÎ ÆÄÀÏÀº ÃÖ´ë 2mb±îÁöÀ̸ç,
÷ºÎ ÇÒ ¼ö ÀÖ´Â ÆÄÀÏ Çü½ÄÀº ´ÙÀ½°ú °°½À´Ï´Ù.

¹®¼­ - PDF, TXT, DOCX,
À̹ÌÁö - JPEG, PNG, GIF
02
Àü¹® ºÐ¾ß¸¦ Á¦¿ÜÇÑ È¸¿ø´ÔÀÌ Á÷Á¢ ÀÛ¼ºÇÑ ±Û¸¸
÷»èÀÌ °¡´ÉÇϸç,

¿Ã·ÁÁֽбÛÀÇ °­»ç´Ô ÷»èÀº 24½Ã°£ À̳»¿¡
¿Ï·á µÇ´Â °ÍÀ» ¿øÄ¢À¸·Î Çϰí ÀÖ½À´Ï´Ù.
03
ÇÏ·ç °Ô½Ã °¡´ÉÇÑ ±ÛÀº 3ȸ±îÁö À̸ç,
Á¾·áµÈ ¼ö¾÷ÀÇ ¿µÀÛ±³Á¤ °Ô½ÃÆÇÀº
ÀÌ¿ëÀÌ ¾î·Á¿î Á¡ ¾çÇØ ºÎŹ µå¸³´Ï´Ù.
04