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The season now in my country

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It is lovely spring now in Korea. It is cool as well as hot in the daytime, but at night it is cool and a little cold. But I feel it is too hot in the daytime because I usually sweat a lot even though it is not too hot. Actually this season is so beautiful because we can see green leaves and beautiful flowers wherever we go, winter is much better to me. Nowadays I like evening more than daytime.

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Hi Scott!

Happy weekend! Great answer on your homework! Take care ^^

T. DON

It is lovely spring now in Korea. It is cool as well as hot in the daytime, but at night it is cool and a little cold. But I feel it is too hot in the daytime because I usually sweat a lot even though it is not too hot. Actually this season is so beautiful because we can see green leaves and beautiful flowers wherever we go, winter is much better to me. Nowadays I like evening more than daytime.
>> It is a lovely spring now in Korea. It is cool as well as hot in the daytime, but at night it is cool and a little cold. But I feel it is too hot in the daytime because I usually sweat a lot even though it is not too hot. Actually this season is so beautiful because we can see green leaves and beautiful flowers wherever we go, winter is much better to me. Nowadays I like evening more than daytime.
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