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What advice would you give the leader of your country?

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First of all the leader of the country have to consider the national interest.
Consideration of national interest is based on most of his(or her) behavior.
for example, diplomatic, economic, and policy all of the considerations are based on national interests.
So I hope my leader thinks about the national interest first.

If the leader thinks about national interest first, he(or she) is never corrupt.

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Hi Ye Na,

Great job on your homework! Your analysis of the importance of considering national interests is insightful and well thought out. It's crucial for leaders to prioritize the national interest in their decision-making processes, as it forms the foundation for their actions in areas such as diplomacy, economics, and policy development. By keeping the national interest at the forefront, leaders can ensure that their decisions align with the welfare of the country and its citizens. I also appreciate your emphasis on the connection between considering national interest and avoiding corruption. When leaders prioritize the well-being of their nation above personal gain, it fosters a culture of integrity and ethical governance. Keep up the good work! I look forward to seeing more of your insightful analyses in the future!

~Teacher Cathy

 

First of all the leader of the country have to consider the national interest.

>>First of all, the leader of the country has to consider the national interest.

Consideration of national interest is based on most of his(or her) behavior.

>>The consideration of the national interest forms the basis for most of his (or her) behavior.

for example, diplomatic, economic, and policy all of the considerations are based on national interests.

>>For example, diplomatic, economic, and policy decisions are all based on national interests.

So I hope my leader thinks about the national interest first.

>>So, I hope my leader thinks about the national interest first.

If the leader thinks about national interest first, he(or she) is never corrupt.

>>If the leader thinks about the national interest first, he (or she) will never be corrupt.

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