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When I'm angry, I take a deep breath and think about something else.
Because I don't want to fight.
But sometimes I can't control myself.
So I'm trying to get out of the place.

So when I'm angry, I say I look normal.

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Hello Da Hye,

Great job on completing your homework once again! I want to commend you for consistently putting in the effort to complete your assignments. I really appreciate how you shared your approach to handling anger. It's impressive that you take a deep breath and shift your focus to something else when you feel angry. That's a smart way to avoid getting into fights or conflicts. Remember, it's normal to sometimes find it hard to control our emotions completely. It's okay to remove yourself from a situation when you feel overwhelmed, as you mentioned. Taking that step back shows maturity and self-awareness. I'm also proud of you for trying your best to appear normal even when you're angry. It shows great self-control and consideration for others. Keep up the good work in your studies, and continue to apply the strategies you've learned to manage your anger. Your dedication to completing your homework is truly commendable.

~Teacher Cathy

 

When I'm angry, I take a deep breath and think about something else.

>>CORRECT

OR>>When I get mad, I take deep breaths and focus my thoughts on something else.

Because I don't want to fight.

>>CORRECT

OR>>Because I want to avoid conflicts.

But sometimes I can't control myself.

>>CORRECT

OR>>However, there are times I¡¯m not able to control myself.

So I'm trying to get out of the place.

>>CORRECT

OR>>So, I try to leave the place.

So when I'm angry, I say I look normal.

>>CORRECT

OR>>I could say that I look the same even when I¡¯m angry.

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