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What effect does violence in movies or video games have on kids?

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Wow, I think it's the opposite of whether sex education is important. But, I don't believe a kind of violence in movies and video games could effect to kids. Do you remember? When we were younger, we used to play that games by using our parents' ID number. But, I didn't copy that like games. I'm sure even the kids can know what is the right or not. Otherwise, it's the parents' responsibility.

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Wishing you a happy Friday, Elic! Enjoy life no matter how hard it may seem. When life gives you a thousand reasons to cry, show the world that you have a million reasons to smile. ^^ You did wonderful today. Keep up the good work. 

Wow, I think it's the opposite of whether sex education is important. 
>>> Wow, I think it's the opposite of whether sex education is important.

But, I don't believe a kind of violence in movies and video games could effect to kids.
>>> But I don't believe the kind of violence in movies and video games could affect kids.

Do you remember? When we were younger, we used to play that games by using our parents' ID number. 
>>> Do you remember? When we were younger, we used to play those games by using our parents' ID numbers.

But, I didn't copy that like games. 
>>> But I didn't copy that like in games.

I'm sure even the kids can know what is the right or not.
>>> I'm sure even the kids can tell if something is right or not.

Otherwise, it's the parents' responsibility.
>>> CORRECT.

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