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~ Writing Task:
Please answer the question:
What do you think the army lifestyle is like?

When I was soldier, I learned many things and met people of various personalities in the military.
I think I did a good job in the army lifestyle. Of course, I make a lot of funny events about me.
I made a many friends there, so I meet them sometimes.
Even them, my military senior lives near my house. I feel it was hard to believe.
There were many fun things, but I received stressed and I think wasted my time.
In addition, sometimes I have nightmares these days.
The story of nightmares is living in the army life again. It's a disaster.
Sometimes I miss my army life, but I never and never want to return.

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

Good day, Keon!
Thank you so much for taking time in answering the question. Your ideas and opinions are on point. Keep it up! :)
~ T. Camille

~ Writing Task:
Please answer the question:
What do you think the army lifestyle is like?


When I was soldier, I learned many things and met people of various personalities in the military.
>> When I was a soldier, I learned many things and met people of various personalities in the military.
I think I did a good job in the army lifestyle. 
>> I think I did a good job in the army. 
Of course, I make a lot of funny events about me.
>> Of course, I made a lot of funny events.
I made a many friends there, so I meet them sometimes.
>> I made many friends there, so I meet them sometimes.
Even them, my military senior lives near my house. 
>> Even them, one of my military seniors lives near my house. 
I feel it was hard to believe.
>> CORRECT!
There were many fun things, but I received stressed and I think wasted my time.
>> There were many fun things, but I got stressed and I think wasted my time.
In addition, sometimes I have nightmares these days.
>> CORRECT!
The story of nightmares is living in the army life again. 
>> The story of my nightmares is about living in the army life again. 
It's a disaster.
>> CORRECT!
Sometimes I miss my army life, but I never and never want to return.
>> CORRECT!
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