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What is your biggest fear?

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My biggest fear is the test. It's because my final term exam is coming. We have to take seven subjects for three days. And we only have two weeks left to prepare it. When more and more days going, my fear is coming bigger than yesterday. So, now my one of biggest fears is the test.

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Hi, sweetie. 
Thank you for answering this homework question. 
I totally understand the root cause of your fear and it's very much valid. I think all students feel the same way as you do. 
But I really believe in my heart that you will make it. I know you've been preparing hard for this exam. 
Believe in yourself and in your abilities and I will keep on rooting for you! Daisy, fighting! :)
See you in  class later. <3
~Teacher Charry


My biggest fear is the test. 
>> CORRECT!
It's because my final term exam is coming. 
>> CORRECT!
We have to take seven subjects for three days. 
>> CORRECT!
And we only have two weeks left to prepare it. 
>> And we only have two weeks left to prepare for it. 
When more and more days going, my fear is coming bigger than yesterday. 
>> As the days go by, my fear becomes greater than the previous day. 
So, now my one of biggest fears is the test.
>> So now, one of my biggest fears is the test.
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