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What three adjectives best describe your personality?

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I can describe myself kindness, humorous, active person.
At first, I'm kindness person.
I believe kind is the most strongest power in the world.
Second, I'm humorous person.
Because I like to make others laugh.
And last, I think i'm active person.
I like to go out and do many activities, I also love travel.
When I travel the place, I tend to experience the place's activities.

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Good afternoon, Summer! ^^,)

Thank you so much for finding time to accomplish your homework.

"Kindness is the best form of humanity." Being kind is showing consideration, compassion, and empathy toward everyone, not just the ones we know and love.

I have made some modifications for you to review. I will see you later in class.

Have a good day!

__T. Mayleen :)


I can describe myself kindness, humorous, active person.
>>> I can describe myself as a kind, humorous, and active person.
At first, I'm kindness person.
>>> First, I'm a kind person.
I believe kind is the most strongest power in the world.
>>> I believe kindness is the strongest power in the world.
Second, I'm humorous person.
>>> Second, I'm a humorous person.
Because I like to make others laugh.
>>> It's because I like to make others laugh.
And last, I think i'm active person.
>>> Last, I think I'm an active person.
I like to go out and do many activities, I also love travel.
>>> I like to go out and do many activities, and I also love to travel.
When I travel the place, I tend to experience the place's activities.
>>> When I travel, I tend to experience the place's activities.
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