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I'm fine.
I'm worried if my friends who reply immediately don't reply, but I don't feel too bad because most of my friends often reply after an hour or text me the next day.
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Hi Da Hye,

Great job on completing your homework! I'm glad to hear that you're doing well. It's normal to feel a bit concerned when your friends don't reply immediately, but remember that many of them often take some time to respond. Don't worry too much about it because it's okay. Keep up the good work Da Hye! See you tomorrow! ^^

~Teacher Cathy

 

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OR>>It¡¯s okay with me.

I'm worried if my friends who reply immediately don't reply, but I don't feel too bad because most of my friends often reply after an hour or text me the next day.

>>I get worried if my friends who reply immediately don¡¯t reply, but I don¡¯t feel too bad because most of my friends often reply after an hour or text me the next day.

So I think it fine me.

>>So, I think it¡¯s fine with me.

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