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Have you ever fallen or nearly fallen for a scam? What did you do?

A few month ago, I got a called voice phishing.
When I answered the call, he introduced to me he is a prosecutor.
He was know my home address, name and age.
And then he told to me "your bank account was used to for fraud".
But, I'm not surprised. I was out of my mind because, I got a call while I was sleeping.
But, his voice was very serious like a doing musical.
So, I spoke loosely, he quit a call and noting happens.
I know well, he is swindler. But, it's not good idea to play tricks to them.
I watched the news media, someone who person prank call to a voice phishing scammer.
But, he was retaliated by scammers.
So, I think, it's better to just avoid these calls.

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Good day, Keon!
Thank you so much for taking time in answering the question. Your ideas and opinions are on point. Keep it up! :)
~ T. Camille


A few month ago, I got a called voice phishing.
>> A few month ago, I got a call from a voice phisher.
When I answered the call, he introduced to me he is a prosecutor.
>> When I answered the call, he introduced to me as a prosecutor.
OR >> When I answered the call, he introduced to me that he is a prosecutor.
He was know my home address, name and age.
>> He knew my home address, name, and age.
And then he told to me "your bank account was used to for fraud".
>> And then he told to me "your bank account was used for fraud".
But, I'm not surprised. 
>> CORRECT!
I was out of my mind because, I got a call while I was sleeping.
>> CORRECT!
But, his voice was very serious like a doing musical.
>> But, his voice was very serious like doing a musical.
So, I spoke loosely, he quit a call and noting happens.
>> So, I spoke loosely, he quit the call and nothing happened.
I know well, he is swindler. 
>> I know it well, he is a swindler. 
But, it's not good idea to play tricks to them.
>> But, it's not a good idea to play tricks on them.
I watched the news media, someone who person prank call to a voice phishing scammer.
>> I watched the news, someone pranked a voice phishing scammer.
But, he was retaliated by scammers.
>> CORRECT!
So, I think, it's better to just avoid these calls.
>> CORRECT!
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