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WRITING TASK: Why is it important to greet people at work?
>> I think it is the most basic ettitue of social life and greeting is the first step of exprssing respect and trust.
It is important to work together, also is closely related to efficiency.
Economic activites is not really fun, but if we can find the pleasure at work.
It will be a good driving force for you.

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WRITING TASK: Why is it important to greet people at work?
>> CORRECT
>> I think it is the most basic ettitue of social life and greeting is the first step of exprssing respect and trust.
>> I think it is the most basic etiquette in social life and it is the first step in expressing respect and trust.
It is important to work together, also is closely related to efficiency.
>> It is important to work together, and it is closely related to efficiency.
Economic activites is not really fun, but if we can find the pleasure at work. It will be a good driving force for you.
>> Economic activities are not really fun, but if we can find the pleasure at work, it will be a good driving force for you.

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