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Give one way/ technique to be better in your understanding/ listening to your native colleagues at w

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Well, I think there would some ways to point out.
First of all, I'd like to make a sentences and questions what they want to get from them. What I mean is that, because I want to resolve the my wondering such as creating my ID card and locker box, I will be likely to listen to them carefully.
Besides, I have to watch English videos and dramas to expose their original pronunciations. When I was there the first time, even though they tried to speak clearly, I didn't understand anyway.
Lastly, no matter what they think , I need to believe that I am not a native. So, I just have to adjust in this situation and as time goes by, I will have a confidence and then I will talk with them more comfortable someday.

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

Hello there, Jane!

While it is true that you are not a native speaker of English you can choose between two things: first, you can listen carefully and just glide along to the sound of American English, or, keep your speech neutral and speak in international standards. Either way, the best thing to focus on is the meaning or the message of your colleagues speech for you to respond properly at all times.

It also matters that you know how to ask the right questions. My suggestion is to use your smartphone AI and ask simple questions there. If AI cannot understand your question, that means, you have to speak more clearly.

Meanwhile, your answer contains very good sentences. Go through my suggestions and note down the grammar patterns. Well done!

See you again next week. I wish you well at work.

-T. Donna~

Well, I think there would some ways to point out.
>> Well, I think there would be some ways to point out.

First of all, I'd like to make a sentences and questions what they want to get from them. 
>>  First of all, I'd like to make sentences and questions that I want to get from them. 

What I mean is that, because I want to resolve the my wondering such as creating my ID card and locker box, I will be likely to listen to them carefully.
>> Correct! Very good sentence!

Besides, I have to watch English videos and dramas to expose their original pronunciations. 
>> Besides, I have to watch English videos and dramas to be exposed to  their original pronunciations. 

When I was there the first time, even though they tried to speak clearly, I didn't understand anyway.
>> Correct!

Lastly, no matter what they think , I need to believe that I am not a native. 
>> Correct!

So, I just have to adjust in this situation and as time goes by, I will have a confidence and then I will talk with them more comfortable someday.
>>  Correct!
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