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I think it\'s the destruction of the ozone layer.

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I think it's the destruction of the ozone layer.
The ozone layer is destroyed, the temperature of the Earth is steadily rising.
I think the phenomenon caused by the destruction of the ozone layer is that the weather changes frequently and natural disasters occur a lot.
Therefore, I think the biggest environmental problem now is the destruction of the ozone layer.

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I think it's the destruction of the ozone layer.

>> CORRECT
The ozone layer is destroyed, the temperature of the Earth is steadily rising.

>>The ozone layer is destroyed, and the temperature of the Earth is steadily rising.
I think the phenomenon caused by the destruction of the ozone layer is that the weather changes frequently and natural disasters occur a lot.

>> CORRECT
Therefore, I think the biggest environmental problem now is the destruction of the ozone layer.

>> CORRECT

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