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HOMEWORK for 07/03
Write 5-8 sentences
TOPIC: What food from your country would you like to recommend to a tourist, and why?


i recommend them eat to samgyubsal because most people like it and it is not a stranger for the first time

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Happy morning, Min Seog! Thank you once again for working hard in answering this homework. Let's continue talking about interesting things in the class next time. See you in our lesson! ~ T. Marie ^^ 
i recommend them eat to samgyubsal because most people like it and it is not a stranger for the first time
>> I recommend them to eat samgyupsal beacause most people like it. 
>> It's not a strange food to try for the first time. 
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