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WRITING TASK: What is the most difficult part of learning English for you?

작성자: 안*쌀
2023-07-04 3496

회원님의 영작문

The most challenging part of learning English is to be accustomed to speaking English naturally. I think that there are several reasons I adjust to speaking English as native speakers do. First of all, I have few opportunities to regularly, if not frequently, talk with native speakers, even though I study English using books or social media. My work and life circumstances do not allow me to communicate with someone in English. To overcome this difficulty, I chose the "Power English" to talk freely with professional teachers who are native speakers. Thus, I look forward to progressing my English skills through the class. Secondly, I need to be confident in expressing my thinking and telling my stories in English. I am still afraid of being incorrect in speaking English, regarding grammar, pronunciation, and logical structure. Even though I must consider these factors for improvement, I need to confidently express my opinions or feelings in English to catch and correct my weakness.

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

I enjoyed reading your answer, Shine! Your ardor for English study will help you achieve your goals. See you!-Faith-
The most challenging part of learning English is to be accustomed to speaking English naturally. 
>> CORRECT
I think that there are several reasons I adjust to speaking English as native speakers do. 
>> I think that there are several reasons why I have to adjust to speaking English as native speakers do. 
First of all, I have few opportunities to regularly, if not frequently, talk with native speakers, even though I study English using books or social media. 
>> CORRECT
My work and life circumstances do not allow me to communicate with someone in English. 
>> CORRECT 
To overcome this difficulty, I chose the "Power English" to talk freely with professional teachers who are native speakers.
>> To overcome this difficulty, I chose Power English to talk freely with professional teachers who are native speakers. 
Thus, I look forward to progressing my English skills through the class. 
>> CORRECT 
OR Hence, I anticipate my English skill advancement through the class.
Secondly, I need to be confident in expressing my thinking and telling my stories in English. 
>> Secondly, I need to be confident in expressing my thoughts and telling my stories in English. 
I am still afraid of being incorrect in speaking English, regarding grammar, pronunciation, and logical structure. 
>> I am still afraid of being incorrect in speaking English regarding grammar, pronunciation, and logical structure. 
Even though I must consider these factors for improvement, I need to confidently express my opinions or feelings in English to catch and correct my weakness.
>> CORRECT 
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