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Write 5-8 sentences
TOPIC: How do you keep yourself healthy?

I usually go to gym for acercize and try eat healthy but it is not perfact

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Good day to you, Min Seog! Thank you for doing your best to respond in this homework. Let's continue to learn more in the class to make your sentences even longer and better. See you! ~ T. Marie
I usually go to gym for acercize and try eat healthy but it is not perfact.
>>I usually go to the gym to exercise. 
>>I also try to eat healthily, but I can't do it perfectly. 
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