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Why I want to recommend Korea to a foreigner

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There are three reasons why I want to recommend Korea to a foreigners.
First, I want to recommend because of the transportation. A subway and bus in Korea are really convenient that you can go anywhere you want. Also, the facilities of the subway in Korea are really clean and also have free wifi, so it¡¯s really convenient to use.
Second, the speed of the internet is really fast. South Korea is known for fast internet and wifi. I guess anyone who use it will be really surprised about it.
Last, Korean foods are really nice. It¡¯s also healthy and tasty, so it can be your soul food.

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There are three reasons why I want to recommend Korea to a foreigners.
>> There are three reasons why I want to recommend Korea to a foreigner.
First, I want to recommend because of the transportation. A subway and bus in Korea are really convenient that you can go anywhere you want. 
>> First, I want to recommend it because of the transportation. A subway and bus in Korea are really convenient and you can go anywhere you want. 
Also, the facilities of the subway in Korea are really clean and also have free wifi, so it¡¯s really convenient to use.
>> Also, the facilities of the subway in Korea are really clean and also have free Wi-Fi, so it¡¯s really convenient to use.
Second, the speed of the internet is really fast. South Korea is known for fast internet and wifi. I guess anyone who use it will be really surprised about it.
>> Second, the internet speed here is really fast. South Korea is known for its fast internet and Wi-Fi. I guess anyone who uses it will be really surprised about it.
Last, Korean foods are really nice. It¡¯s also healthy and tasty, so it can be your soul food.
>> Lastly, Korean foods are really nice. It¡¯s also healthy and tasty, so it can be your soul food.
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