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In Korean coffee shops we can use free wifi. Most of the coffee shops including individual cafes have free wifi so there are lots of students and office workers do their works there. In Korea there is also a slang called ¡°Ä«°øÁ·(kagongjok)¡± which means the people who study at the cafe.
Also, in Korean coffee shops, there are numerous kinds of menus such as smoothe, aid, juice, and coffee. In Korea there are lots of season menus and new menus that come out every month, so you can enjoy lots of menus.
Lastly, there are concentric plugs at all the seats, so you can charge your phone or tablets with you charger. I think this is really convenient, because when my phone runs down I go to cafe to use it.
I think Korean coffee shops are really good place to do works and have a free time.

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In Korean coffee shops we can use free wifi.
>> In Korean coffee shops, we can use free Wi-Fi.
Most of the coffee shops including individual cafes have free wifi so there are lots of students and office workers do their works there. 
>> Most of the coffee shops have free Wi-Fi so lots of students and office workers can do their work there. 
In Korea there is also a slang called ¡°Ä«°øÁ·(kagongjok)¡± which means the people who study at the cafe.
>> In Korea, there is also a slang called ¡°Ä«°øÁ·(kagongjok)¡± which means the people who love studying or working at the cafe.
Also, in Korean coffee shops, there are numerous kinds of menus such as smoothe, aid, juice, and coffee. 
>>  Also, in Korean coffee shops, there are numerous kinds of drinks such as a smoothie, aid, juice, and coffee. 
In Korea there are lots of season menus and new menus that come out every month, so you can enjoy lots of menus.
>> In Korea there are lots of seasonal menus and new menus every month, so people can enjoy and have lots of options. 
Lastly, there are concentric plugs at all the seats, so you can charge your phone or tablets with you charger. 
>> Lastly, there are concentric plugs at all the seats, so you can charge your phone or tablets with your charger. 
I think this is really convenient, because when my phone runs down I go to cafe to use it.
>>  I think this is really convenient because when my phone runs down on battery, I go to a cafe to charge it.
I think Korean coffee shops are really good place to do works and have a free time.
>> I think Korean coffee shops are a really good place to do work and have free time.
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