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What makes you happy?

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Present makes me happy.
It's looking farward to it.
And travel makes me happy too.
It's looking faward to it.
And also TV makes me happy too.
Beacause it's funny.

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Hi Henry!

Thank for doing your homework ^^

T. DON

Present makes me happy.
It's looking farward to it.
And travel makes me happy too.
It's looking faward to it.
And also TV makes me happy too.
Beacause it's funny.

>> Present makes me happy and I am looking forward to it. And travelling also makes me happy too. And watching TV also makes me happy too beacause it's funny.
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