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~ Writing Task:
Please answer the question:
What culture aside from your own do you find interesting? Why?

When I travel abroad, I feel the cultural difference of other countries.
Even in Japan, near to Korea, there is a big difference in culture.
So, I try to understand there culture.
I am interesting in languages among the various cultures.
I experienced when I visit to Europe in last April.
I went Germany,Belgium and France.
These three countries are near to each other.
But, these countries using a different languages.
Among these countries, I feel Belgium is special.
Belgium don't have it's own language.
So, there people using three languages.
It using French, Dutch and German.
Among them, Belgium use a lot of French.
And in common these countries people used well English.
So, I was amazed because It's near to countries, but these countries language is different.

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

Good day, Keon!
Thank you so much for taking time in answering the question. Your ideas and opinions are on point. Keep it up! :)
~ T. Camille


~ Writing Task:
Please answer the question:
What culture aside from your own do you find interesting? Why?


When I travel abroad, I feel the cultural difference of other countries.
>> When I traveled abroad, I felt the cultural difference of other countries.
Even in Japan, near to Korea, there is a big difference in culture.
>> Even in Japan, which is near to Korea, there is a big difference in culture.
So, I try to understand there culture.
>> So, I try to understand their culture.
I am interesting in languages among the various cultures.
>> I am interested in languages of all countries.
I experienced when I visit to Europe in last April.
>> I experienced it when I visited Europe last April.
I went Germany,Belgium and France.
>>  I went to Germany, Belgium, and France.
These three countries are near to each other.
>> CORRECT!
But, these countries using a different languages.
>> But, these countries use different languages.
Among these countries, I feel Belgium is special.
>> Among these countries, I feel like Belgium is special.
OR >> Among these countries, I think Belgium is special.
Belgium don't have it's own language.
>> Belgium doesn't have its own language.
So, there people using three languages.
>> So, people in Belgium use three languages.
It using French, Dutch and German.
>>  They use French, Dutch, and German.
Among them, Belgium use a lot of French.
>> Among them, French is widely used in Belgium.
And in common these countries people used well English.
>> And in common, people in these countries use English well.
So, I was amazed because It's near to countries, but these countries language is different.
>> So, I was amazed because these near countries are near each other, but they use different languages.

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