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One of the hottest trends these days seems to be the Internet of Things (IoT).
This year, the smart home has been applied more to our lives.
My house also has a new air conditioner, and it is possible to control the temperature outside the house, so it is safe even if there are only pets in the house.

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Thank you for diligently doing your homework, this provides you additional insight and ways on how to write and make your sentences correctly. Enjoy the day and its benefits!
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One of the hottest trends these days seems to be the Internet of Things (IoT).
>>> CORRECT!

This year, the smart home has been applied more to our lives
>>> CORRECT!

My house also has a new air conditioner, and it is possible to control the temperature outside the house, so it is safe even if there are only pets in the house.
>>> CORRECT!

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