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Something that make me happy

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I am almost always happy but let me tell you when I especially happy. Firstly, playing video games at break time make me very happy. Secondly, playing badminton with my family and playing dodge ball with my friends make me happy. Those give me lots of energy. Lastly eating delicious food like chicken, pizza, hamburger and steak make me super happy.

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Hi Scott!

Happy Tuesday! Great answer on your homework!

T. DON

I am almost always happy but let me tell you when I especially happy. Firstly, playing video games at break time make me very happy. Secondly, playing badminton with my family and playing dodge ball with my friends make me happy. Those give me lots of energy. Lastly eating delicious food like chicken, pizza, hamburger and steak make me super happy.
>> I am almost always happy but let me tell you when I am especially happy. Firstly, playing video games at break time makes me absolutely happy. Secondly, playing badminton with my family and playing dodge ball with my friends make me happy. Those activities give me lots of energy. Lastly eating delicious food like chicken, pizza, hamburger and steak make me super happy.
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