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~ Writing Task:
Please answer the question:
What exotic food would you like to try?

I like most foods, and eat well them(most food).
I think I don't have allergy of food, it's lucky.
So, I can try various food without worry.
But, there are many foods I don't tried yet.
The reason is I have a lot of fear of food.
Among the exotic food, I want try lamb.
I have never tried lamb.
Because, I heard lamb is has a unique smells.
So, If you sensitive to smell, it's difficult to try.
I also to sensitive to smell, so I have worries before I eat food.
But, I'll overcome it and I'll try new foods.

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

Good day, Keon!
Thank you so much for taking time in answering the question. Your ideas and opinions are on point. Keep it up! :)
~ T. Camille

~ Writing Task:
Please answer the question:
What exotic food would you like to try?


I like most foods, and eat well them(most food).
>> I like most foods, and eat them well (most food).
I think I don't have allergy of food, it's lucky.
>> I think I don't have any food allergies, so I'm lucky.
So, I can try various food without worry.
>> CORRECT!
But, there are many foods I don't tried yet.
>> But, there are many kinds of food I haven't tried yet.
The reason is I have a lot of fear of food.
>> The reason is I have a lot of fear of trying different kinds of food.
Among the exotic food, I want try lamb.
>> Among the exotic food, I want to try eating lamb meat.
I have never tried lamb.
>> I have never tried eating lamb meat before.
Because, I heard lamb is has a unique smells.
>> Because, I heard lamb meat has a unique smell.
So, If you sensitive to smell, it's difficult to try.
>> So, if you are sensitive to the smell, it's difficult to try.
I also to sensitive to smell, so I have worries before I eat food.
>> I am also sensitive to the smell, so I have worries about eating food before.
But, I'll overcome it and I'll try new foods.
>> But, I'll overcome it and I'll try various kinds of food.

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