¹«·á ·¹º§Å×½ºÆ® ¹Þ°í °­»çÆò°¡ ³²±â¸é 1,OOO¿ø ÄíÆù Áï½Ã Àû¸³!

Ȥ½Ã »çÀÌÆ®¿¡¼± ãÁö ¸øÇÑ ±Ã±ÝÇÑ Á¡ÀÌ ÀÖÀ¸¼¼¿ä?
³²°ÜÁֽŠÀ̸ÞÀÏÀ» ÅëÇØ ´äº¯ µå¸®°Ú½À´Ï´Ù.

¹®ÀÇÇϽг»¿ëÀÌ ¹®ÀÚ·Î ¹ß¼ÛµÇ¿À´Ï
¿¬¶ôó¸¦ ³²°ÜÁÖ¼¼¿ä.
¾÷¹«½Ã°£ ¿ù~±Ý ¿ÀÀü9½Ã~¿ÀÈÄ6½Ã
(Á¡½É½Ã°£ ³·12½Ã~¿ÀÈÄ1½Ã)

¿µÀÛ±³Á¤ °Ô½ÃÆÇ

¿µ¾î ¸»Çϱâ¿Í ¾²±â¸¦ µ¿½Ã¿¡ Àâ´Â´Ù!

ÀڽŠÀÖ°Ô ¾µ ¼ö ÀÖ´Â ¿µÀÛ¹®À» À§ÇØ ÆÄ¿öÀ×±Û¸®½¬ ¼ö¾÷À» ¼ö°­ÇϽôÂ
ȸ¿ø´Ôµé²² ¹«·á·Î Á¦°øÇص帮´Â ºÎ°¡ ¼­ºñ½º·Î, Àü¹® ºÐ¾ß¸¦ Á¦¿ÜÇÑ ÀÚÀ¯ ÁÖÁ¦
¶Ç´Â °­»ç´ÔÀÌ ³»Áֽô °úÁ¦¸¦ ȸ¿ø´Ô²²¼­ ¿µ¾î·Î ÀÛ¼ºÇØÁֽøé,
´ã´ç °­»ç ´Ô²²¼­ ¡®¹®¹ý ¿À·ù ±³Á¤¡¯ °ú ¡®´õ ³ªÀº ¿µ¾î½Ä Ç¥Çö¡¯À¸·Î ±³Á¤ÇØÁÖ´Â
¼­ºñ½º ÀÔ´Ï´Ù.

Homework

ÀÛ¼ºÀÚ: ½Å*È­
2023-07-14 2921

ȸ¿ø´ÔÀÇ ¿µÀÛ¹®

Yeosu is a city with a beautiful night sea.
As my husband's hometown, I used to often say that the sea is beautiful.
The Ocean Water Park is famous for playing in the water.
Also, Odongdo Island with beautiful camellia flowers is also recommended.
In addition, the Yeosu Marine Cable Car is entirely made of glass windows, and you can enjoy the experience of floating on the sea while passing through the sea.
Yeosu Pocha, which opens at night, is also a place worth visiting, where you can enjoy delicious food and busking.

°­»ç´ÔÀÇ Ã·»è±³Á¤ ³»¿ë

Eliana!
Thank you for sharing about Yeosu. I heard many stories about Yeosu and hope to see that if I got a chance.
Have a great day!
Aki~

Yeosu is a city with a beautiful night sea.
>>> CORRECT!

As my husband's hometown, I used to often say that the sea is beautiful.
>>> CORRECT!

The Ocean Water Park is famous for playing in the water.
>>> CORRECT!

Also, Odongdo Island with beautiful camellia flowers is also recommended.
>>> CORRECT!

In addition, the Yeosu Marine Cable Car is entirely made of glass windows, and you can enjoy the experience of floating on the sea while passing through the sea.
>>> CORRECT!

Yeosu Pocha, which opens at night, is also a place worth visiting, where you can enjoy delicious food and busking.
>>> CORRECT!

¹øÈ£ Á¦¸ñ ±Û¾´ÀÌ °ø°³ »óÅ µî·ÏÀÏ Á¶È¸¼ö
129701 What do you like most about your communication device... ½Å*¼· ¿Ï·á 2023-07-22 3202
129700 Homework ±è*¼º ¿Ï·á 2023-07-22 3301
129699 Without plastic! ±è*À± ¿Ï·á 2023-07-21 3167
129698 homework ÃÖ*Ç ¿Ï·á 2023-07-21 4451
129697 What\'s your thought on branding? ±è*¹Î ¿Ï·á 2023-07-21 3
129696 WRITING TASK: What will happen to a person who cannot adapt to a... ÀÓ*Áö ¿Ï·á 2023-07-21 3
129695 If you had to live in another country (for always) where would... Á¶*¹Î ¿Ï·á 2023-07-21 1
129694 How do you keep your body strong and healthy? ¹Ú*Çö ¿Ï·á 2023-07-21 2363
129693 Homework ÀÌ*È­ ¿Ï·á 2023-07-21 3629
129692 Shopping bag! ±è*À± ¿Ï·á 2023-07-21 3403
129691 Today\'s homework ÀÌ*µµ ¿Ï·á 2023-07-21 4215
129690 unit 16. deadline °ø*¿ì ¿Ï·á 2023-07-21 2238
129689 Thank you ¿ì*Áø ¿Ï·á 2023-07-21 3
129688 Homework for 07/13 ¹æ*¿¬ ¿Ï·á 2023-07-21 3
129687 Is there a food that you will never eat? ¾ç*Á¤ ¿Ï·á 2023-07-21 4931
129686 What is gender divide? Do you agree that providing parking... Ȳ*ÇÏ ¿Ï·á 2023-07-21 3639
129685 7/19 homework °­*Èñ ¿Ï·á 2023-07-21 2
129684 Homework Á¶*ÁØ ¿Ï·á 2023-07-21 5260
129683 Day8 ½Å*À± ¿Ï·á 2023-07-21 1
129682 Day9 ½Å*À± ¿Ï·á 2023-07-21 2

HOW TO USE IT?

[¸¶ÀÌÆäÀÌÁö > ¼ö¾÷ ³»¿ë º¸±â > ÇнÀ ͏°´õ > ¿µÀÛ±³Á¤ ¹öư Ŭ¸¯]

¼ö¾÷ Ƚ¼ö¸¸Å­ ¿µÀÛ±³Á¤ °Ô½ÃÆÇÀÌ »ý¼ºµÇ¸ç,
Áö³­ ³¯Â¥¿¡µµ °Ô½Ã ÇÒ ¼ö ÀÖ½À´Ï´Ù.

ÁÖ5ȸ ¼ö¾÷ : ¿ù 20ȸ ÀÌ¿ë °¡´É
ÁÖ3ȸ ¼ö¾÷ : ¿ù 12ȸ ÀÌ¿ë °¡´É
ÁÖ2ȸ ¼ö¾÷ : ¿ù 08ȸ ÀÌ¿ë °¡´É
01
±³Á¤ ³»¿ëÀº ÃÖ´ë 1,000byte±îÁö ¿Ã¸± ¼ö ÀÖ½À´Ï´Ù.

÷ºÎ ÆÄÀÏÀº ¿øÈ°ÇÑ Ã·»èÀ» À§ÇÑ Âü°íÀÚ·á·Î »ç¿ëµÉ »Ó,
ÆÄÀÏ¿¡ ´ëÇÑ Ã·»èÀº ºÒ°¡´É ÇÕ´Ï´Ù.

¾÷·Îµå °¡´ÉÇÑ Ã·ºÎ ÆÄÀÏÀº ÃÖ´ë 2mb±îÁöÀ̸ç,
÷ºÎ ÇÒ ¼ö ÀÖ´Â ÆÄÀÏ Çü½ÄÀº ´ÙÀ½°ú °°½À´Ï´Ù.

¹®¼­ - PDF, TXT, DOCX,
À̹ÌÁö - JPEG, PNG, GIF
02
Àü¹® ºÐ¾ß¸¦ Á¦¿ÜÇÑ È¸¿ø´ÔÀÌ Á÷Á¢ ÀÛ¼ºÇÑ ±Û¸¸
÷»èÀÌ °¡´ÉÇϸç,

¿Ã·ÁÁֽбÛÀÇ °­»ç´Ô ÷»èÀº 24½Ã°£ À̳»¿¡
¿Ï·á µÇ´Â °ÍÀ» ¿øÄ¢À¸·Î Çϰí ÀÖ½À´Ï´Ù.
03
ÇÏ·ç °Ô½Ã °¡´ÉÇÑ ±ÛÀº 3ȸ±îÁö À̸ç,
Á¾·áµÈ ¼ö¾÷ÀÇ ¿µÀÛ±³Á¤ °Ô½ÃÆÇÀº
ÀÌ¿ëÀÌ ¾î·Á¿î Á¡ ¾çÇØ ºÎŹ µå¸³´Ï´Ù.
04