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TOPIC: What form of public transport do you usually use? What can you say about it? Is it expensive or cheap? Do you like taking it?

I usually use to subway because I have to something a lot that I go to seoul. Our city's subway is have been developed to seoul. Its price is not bad. I like use to subway in summer because its cool.

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I usually use to subway because I have to something a lot that I go to seoul. 
>> I usually use the subway when I have to do a lot of things in Seoul.
>> OR I usually take the subway when I have to do a lot of things in Seoul.
Our city's subway is have been developed to seoul. 
>> Our city's subway has been developed, and is now connected to Seoul.
Its price is not bad. 
>> CORRECT 
I like use to subway in summer because its cool.
>> I like to use the subway because it's cool. 
>> OR I like to ride the subway because it's cool. 
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