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Fee for museum and gallery.

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I think we should pay fee for museum and gallery because It is for the values about the art. If we did not pay for it we would think that it were nothing. It makes decline developments about art.

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Hi there again, Thomas!

The payment people give to the museums and art galleries are meant to maintain these places so we can keep the organized, clean, and the artworks to stay in the best condition as they can be.

Thank you for the well-thought sentences as well as the organization of your ideas. You always maintain a very good set of vocabulary in your writing. Carry on!

See you soon!

-T. Donna~

I think we should pay fee for museum and gallery because It is for the values about the art. 
>> I think we should pay the fee for museums and galleries because it is for the values about the art. 

If we did not pay for it we would think that it were nothing. 
>> If we did not pay for it we would think that it was nothing. 

It makes decline developments about art.
>> It makes the development of art decline.
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