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Hi, there.
How was your day?
I feel uncomfortable because there were some bad things in the clinic.
I heard that a client complained yesterday.
You can't imagine what happened.
Two staffs did a paper-scissor-stone to decide who would manage the client and he watched what they did.
He was so dissapointed with it, because he thought that they didn't want to do a service to him.
Dr. MJ and I scolded the manager of that department.
In the afternoon, Dr.MJ found that our inventory management had been screwed.
We decided to remove the incentive of the manager who is in charge of it.
I think she will resign, and this thought makes me sad.
I like most of my staff, so I don't want them leave.
However, we have no choice.
To manage our clinic, we always have to teach, encourage, and often punish them.
Meanwhile, I don't know the word "wellness".
Did you mean "Welfare institution"?
I think that both welfare and growth are crucial for all society.
If you didn't mean this, please tell me tomorrow.

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Hello, Dr. Kim! I feel sorry to hear that. I hope they can learn their lesson after that incident. Anyway, 'wellness' talks about activities that are designed to help people feel healthier and happier, or the business of providing these activities. 
Hi, there.
>> CORRECT
How was your day?
>> CORRECT
I feel uncomfortable because there were some bad things in the clinic.
>> CORRECT
I heard that a client complained yesterday.
>> CORRECT
You can't imagine what happened.
>> CORRECT
Two staffs did a paper-scissor-stone to decide who would manage the client and he watched what they did.
>> Two of my staff played rock paper scissors to decide who would manage the client and he watched what they did.
He was so dissapointed with it, because he thought that they didn't want to do a service to him.
>> He was so disappointed with it because he thought that they didn't want to do a service to him.
Dr. MJ and I scolded the manager of that department.
>> CORRECT
In the afternoon, Dr.MJ found that our inventory management had been screwed.
>> In the afternoon, Dr. MJ found that our inventory management had been screwed.
We decided to remove the incentive of the manager who is in charge of it.
>> CORRECT
I think she will resign, and this thought makes me sad.
>> CORRECT
I like most of my staff, so I don't want them leave.
>> I like most of my staff, so I don't want them to leave.
However, we have no choice.
>> CORRECT
To manage our clinic, we always have to teach, encourage, and often punish them.
>> To manage our clinic, we always have to teach, encourage, and often have them face their consequences.
Meanwhile, I don't know the word "wellness".
>> CORRECT
Did you mean "Welfare institution"?
>> Did you mean "welfare institution"?
I think that both welfare and growth are crucial for all society.
>> I think that both welfare and growth are crucial in society.
If you didn't mean this, please tell me tomorrow.
>> CORRECT
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