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WRITING TASK: How do our thoughts and emotions affect our ability to keep secrets?

Our thoughts help us make rational judgments.
Therefore, thoughts help us keep secrets well.
Thinking refrains from emotional judgment.

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A: Our thoughts help us make rational judgments. Therefore, thoughts help us keep secrets well. Thinking refrains from emotional judgment.
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OR >> Our thoughts play a crucial role in making rational judgments, and they can also assist us in keeping secrets. By engaging in thoughtful reflection, we can avoid making emotional judgments that could compromise our ability to maintain confidentiality.
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