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Is it possible to feel lonely even when surrounded by people? Why or why not?

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I often feel lonely even when surrounded by people.
It sounds weird. However, on the other hand, it totally makes sense.
Because hanging out with other people could help alleviate someone's loneliness, it is impossible to remove someone's loneliness fully.
Also, sometimes I feel I am perfect even when I'm alone.
I believe that people can handle their loneliness by only themselves.

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Good morning, Yun Ju! 

Some people might think that you need to live alone to feel lonely. Or that being lonely means not having many friends or family around you. But you can have lots of social contact and support and still feel lonely. Especially if you don't feel understood or cared for by the people around you.

- Kristine ^^ 

I often feel lonely even when surrounded by people.
>> Correct.
Or >> I often find myself lonely despite being surrounded by people.
It sounds weird. 
>> Correct. 
Or >> It sounds peculiar. 
However, on the other hand, it totally makes sense.
>> On the other hand, that makes perfect sense.
Because hanging out with other people could help alleviate someone's loneliness, it is impossible to remove someone's loneliness fully.
>> It is impossible to fully eradicate someone's loneliness because socializing with others can assist in alleviating it.
Also, sometimes I feel I am perfect even when I'm alone.
>> In addition, I feel perfect even when I'm alone.
I believe that people can handle their loneliness by only themselves.
>> I think that people are capable of managing their loneliness on their own.


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