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What are some of the benefits of traveling?
First one is that travel exposes us in new environment and help us to get courage whatever we can do.
The other one is that we can broad our horizons throug a variety of people sharing our life.

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Thank you for accomplishing your homework! This kind of activity helps you to stay on track. Make English speaking and/or writing a daily habit of yours. It only seems impossible until it¡¯s 

done! So have faith you¡¯ll be better. Keep up the good work! I believe in you. See you in class!


Regards,

Teacher Lexie


What are some of the benefits of traveling?
First one is that travel exposes us in new environment and help us to get courage whatever we can do.
>> The first one is that traveling exposes us in a new environment and help us to get the courage to do whatever we dream of.
The other one is that we can broad our horizons throug a variety of people sharing our life.
>> The other one is that we can broaden our horizon through a variety of people we share our life with.
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