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I am going to go to Japan to see my friend who was my English teacher in the Philippines. We have ketp in touch since 2013. When we see in Sep 2023 It will have been seeing for 10 years. I will hang out with him and talk a lot with alcohol. It must be fun.

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Hello, Thomas!


This sounds like one fantastic vacation for the books. It seems like you are super close with your Filipino teacher and meeting in Japan is destined after a decade. Well, you can do a lot of catching up as well as have a great time hitting the bottles. 

Your sentences below have been very good from the last time I told you that some of them are according to the Filipino syntax. This time, your pattern is more international with your vocabulary as well as smooth transition. Continue writing to track your progress. Well done!

Take care and see you again in class.

-T. Donna~

I am going to go to Japan to see my friend who was my English teacher in the Philippines. 
>> I am going to Japan to see my friend who was my English teacher in the Philippines.

We have ketp in touch since 2013. 
>> Correct!
Or: Kept

When we see in Sep 2023 It will have been seeing for 10 years. 
>> When we meet in September 2023 it will have been10 years since I last saw him. 

I will hang out with him and talk a lot with alcohol. It must be fun.
>> Correct!
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