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What is health care like for old and poor people in your country?

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In Korea, a preventive injection give them for free to prevent disease.
And some test for health enforce for old and poor people.
Park in Korea are placed any daily health equipments. Almost every park have those.

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Hi Su,

Thank you for doing your homework! I appreciate your effort in sharing about health practices in Korea. You're doing a fantastic job, and I can't wait to see how you continue to grow and excel in your studies. Have a wonderful day!

~Teacher Cathy

 

In Korea, a preventive injection give them for free to prevent disease.

>>In Korea, preventive injections are given to people for free to prevent diseases.

OR>>In Korea, they provide free preventive injections to help people avoid getting sick.
And some test for health enforce for old and poor people.

>>Some health tests are enforced for old and poor people.

OR>>Old and poor people are mandated to take specific health tests.
Park in Korea are placed any daily health equipments.

>>Parks in Korea are equipped with various daily health facilities.

OR>> Parks in Korea have different health facilities that people can use every day.

Almost every park have those.

>>Almost every park has them.

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