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Hmmmmmm well, let see the difference between the new generation and previous generation. They tend to do something together in the generation X whatever is fun and hard. It seems like a community mind. But now, it doesn't loot that they will do in the generation Z. Of course, they only think about their own benefits. And they don't want to spend time for other people except for the volunteers.

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Great work, Eric! Thank you for always keeping up with your expressions and opinions. You're very vocal with your thoughts and that's a great practice! Keep it up!
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A: Hmmmmmm well, let see the difference between the new generation and previous generation. They tend to do something together in the generation X whatever is fun and hard. It seems like a community mind. But now, it doesn't loot that they will do in the generation Z. Of course, they only think about their own benefits. And they don't want to spend time for other people except for the volunteers.
>> Well, let's see the difference between the new generation and the previous generation. They tend to do something together in Generation X whatever is fun and hard. It seems like a community mind. But now, it doesn't look like they will do in Generation Z. Of course, they only think about their benefits. And they don't want to spend time with other people except for the volunteers.
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