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회원님의 영작문

Hello, T.Faith.
How are you doing today?
There was nothing special in the clinic.
That's way I am so bored.
Since I have a meeting with my friends this evening, I am just looking forward to it.
Because about one hour left to the close time, it's too difficult to wait for it.
Do you have any medical problem?
As I grow older, I quiet often have a symtom of gastritis, headache, dermatitis, and so on.
Also, I sometimes find my blood sugar level and blood pressure a little high.
Getting disease is so sad.
While I have a enthusiastic mind, my body is getting old so quickly.
Negative thought coms to my mind when there is no work, I think.
Writing task:
I want my people percieve me a good person.
I have a good empathy to others, which sometimes it makes me too hard.
I am not sure which type of person I want to be these days.
What about you?
My friend came to our clinic.
I should get going.
I will drink too much, so I am not sure if I can attend tomorrow's class.
See you.

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

Good morning, Dr. Kim! I hope you can easily overcome your hangover with some of your favorite foods today. I would also like people to see me as an understanding person, but since I know I am not perfect, I just pray that they can accept me just as I am.
Hello, T.Faith.
>> Hello, T. Faith.
How are you doing today?
>> CORRECT
There was nothing special in the clinic. 
That's way I am so bored.
>> There was nothing special in the clinic that's why I was so bored.
Since I have a meeting with my friends this evening, I am just looking forward to it.
>> CORRECT
Because about one hour left to the close time, it's too difficult to wait for it.
>> There is only about one hour left before the closing time, and it's too difficult to wait for it.
Do you have any medical problem?
>> CORRECT
As I grow older, I quiet often have a symtom of gastritis, headache, dermatitis, and so on.
>> As I grow older, I quiet often have a symptom of gastritis, headache, and dermatitis.
Also, I sometimes find my blood sugar level and blood pressure a little high.
>> CORRECT
OR At times, my blood sugar level and blood pressure go up a little.
Getting disease is so sad.
>> Getting diseases is so sad.
While I have a enthusiastic mind, my body is getting old so quickly.
>> While I have an enthusiastic mind, my body is getting old so quickly.
Negative thought coms to my mind when there is no work, I think.
>> Negative thoughts come to my mind when there is no work, I think.
Writing task:
>> CORRECT
I want my people percieve me a good person.
>> I want my people to perceive me as a good person.
I have a good empathy to others, which sometimes it makes me too hard.
>> I have a good empathy to others, which sometimes makes me feel difficult.
I am not sure which type of person I want to be these days.
>> CORRECT
What about you?
>> CORRECT
My friend came to our clinic.
>> CORRECT
I should get going.
>> CORRECT
I will drink too much, so I am not sure if I can attend tomorrow's class.
>> CORRECT
See you.
>> CORRECT
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