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Homework : When do you see yourself being competitive?

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I think I'm competitive in thinking creative ideas and persuading others. Since I was young, I have liked to imagine various things, including whimsy thoughts, and this has contributed greatly to creative ideas. Also, when I was in university, I was in a lot of situations where I made presentations or persuaded others, and I think those experiences make me competitive now.

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Being competitive is good as long as you don't harm or hurt others. Try to compete against yourself because you are the first person who gets satisfied when you reached your goal. En joy the weekend!
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I think I'm competitive in thinking creative ideas and persuading others. 
>> CORRECT!

Since I was young, I have liked to imagine various things, including whimsy thoughts, and this has contributed greatly to creative ideas.
>>>  Since I was young, I have liked to imagine various things, including whimsy thoughts, and this has contributed greatly to creative ideas.
 
Also, when I was in university, I was in a lot of situations where I made presentations or persuaded others, and I think those experiences make me competitive now.
>> CORRECT!

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