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I don¡¯t support intercultural arranged marriage.
To come true international marriage.
They have to met more than 5years
for understand their culture.
First of all their relationship should be equal
not top and bottom.

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Good day, Ms. Sunny!
Thank you for letting me understand your thought and I agree with you that it takes time to build trust, love, and respect for a couple. However, what is happening now in every country where a local marries a foreigner for security purposes, does not build a firm foundation of a relationship.
Also, this is not different from a person marrying another person with the same nationality if they were married by force or wealth.
marriage is a very complicated aspect of life is it did not start with love.
Have a good day!
Aki~


I don¡¯t support intercultural arranged marriage.
>>> CORRECT!

To come true international marriage.
>>> CORRECT!

They have to met more than 5years for understand their culture.
>>> They have to meet for more than 5 years to understand each other's culture.

First of all their relationship should be equal not top and bottom.
>>> First of all their relationship should be equal not superior and inferior. 

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