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1. Q: Why do you think people should/shouldn't have hobbies?
A: I think the reason people should have hobbies is reducing bad feelings, get good feelings and spend the free time.

2. Q: How much time should someone spend on his hobby?
A: some people spend many hours on their hobby, another people spend short time on his hobby. Maybe, I think they spend their free time on their hobby.

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You always do well in class. Learning a language takes time. You have to trust the process. You are more than capable of accomplishing more than you could ever imagine. With determination, persistence, and hard work, anything can be possible. Feel no pressure at all when studying. Learning new information every day is fun and beneficial for you. Think about it that way; you won¡¯t be bored or tired.


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1. Q: Why do you think people should/shouldn't have hobbies?
A: I think the reason people should have hobbies is reducing bad feelings, get good feelings and spend the free time.
>> I think the reason people should have hobbies is to reduce bad feelings, get good feelings, and spend their free time. 

2. Q: How much time should someone spend on his hobby?
A: some people spend many hours on their hobby, another people spend short time on his hobby. Maybe, I think they spend their free time on their hobby.
>> Some people spend many hours on their hobby and other people spend a short time on their hobby.
Maybe, I think they spend their free time on their hobby.
>> I think they spend their free time on their hobby.
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