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What do you include in your ideal fitness program?

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Hi gelly.
first of all, Im sorry I couldn't attend the class scheduled yesterday. When you called me, I fell a sleep for a whlie.
By the way, how have you been? doing good?
I worried you closed the classes from 8.15 to 8.16.
I hope you are doing well.
See you at 9pm ^^

(Homework)
I think balanced life style is most important.
Not only doing exercise but also having healthy foods and taking a sleep reagulary should be done at the same time.
In my case, because I have to take care of my daughter and do housechore, I'm usually doing home fitnesss watching youtube and try to have healthy foods made by me. For example salad without sauce and law salt food. But I'm a working mom, I often eat delivery food also.^^;

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Hello Sophia! I am doing well and I apologize for not seeing you last August 15-16, I had some issues to handle. But everything is okay now, thanks by the way. ^^ Anyway, no worries about yesterday, just as I thought that you might be tired or busy. So I'll see you later. ¢¾ ~ T.Gelly


I think balanced life style is most important.
>> I think a balanced lifestyle is very important.
Not only doing exercise but also having healthy foods and taking a sleep reagulary should be done at the same time.
>> Not only doing exercise but also eating healthy foods and taking enough sleep regularly should be done at the same time.
In my case, because I have to take care of my daughter and do housechore, I'm usually doing home fitnesss watching youtube and try to have healthy foods made by me. 
>> In my case, because I have to take care of my daughter and do house chores, I'm usually doing home fitness by watching YouTube and trying to have healthy foods I made.
For example salad without sauce and law salt food. 
>> For example a bowl of salad without sauce and low salt only.
But I'm a working mom, I often eat delivery food also.^^;
>> But I'm a working mom, so I often eat delivery food.

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