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What is the best season to enjoy travelling in Korea? Why?

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I think fall is the best season to visit Korea. Fall's temperature is not too hot or cold. So, in fall, we can enjoy Korea's everything without worrying about temperature. It makes our travelling more easier!

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Hi, Seon!

Thank you for answering your homework!

~T. Divina^^

Here are some things to take note of:

1. I think fall is the best season to visit Korea. 
>>CORRECT!

2. Fall's temperature is not too hot or cold. 
>>Fall's temperature is not too hot or too cold. 

3. So, in fall, we can enjoy Korea's everything without worrying about temperature. 
>>In fall, we can enjoy Korea's everything without worrying about temperature.

4. It makes our travelling more easier!
>>It makes our travelling easier!
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