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What are the pros and cons of keeping a pet?

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If we have a pet, we can learn life is how important. Having pet needs to high responsibility, money, and love. Through this process, pets give us love back and emotional stability.
But when they die, we feel a big sorrows. I don¡¯t want to feel that so I¡¯m going to have a pet when I¡¯m old.

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I completely agree with you, Hyomin! I also don't have a pet right now because of the exact reasons you gave.  Thank you for sharing your answer with me, and have a lovely week ahead! 
~T.Harmony <3 

If we have a pet, we can learn life is how important. 
>> If we have a pet, we can learn the importance of life.

Having pet needs to high responsibility, money, and love. 
>> Having a pet requires high responsibility, money, and love.

Through this process, pets give us love back and emotional stability.
>> Through this process, pets return the love to us and offer emotional stability.

But when they die, we feel a big sorrows. 
>> But when they die, we feel sorrowful.

I don¡¯t want to feel that so I¡¯m going to have a pet when I¡¯m old.
>> CORRECT!
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