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HOMEWORK for 09/01
Write 5-8 sentences
TOPIC: What do you do whenever you can't fall asleep easily?


when I can't sleep I use my phone with youtubevideo but I don't watch just linsten the sound

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Hello there, Min Seog! Thank you for always doing great in answering the questions that I'm giving you in the homework. We will continue to practice more in the class. See you there! ~ T. Marie ^^ 
when I can't sleep I use my phone with youtubevideo but I don't watch just linsten the sound.
>> When I can't sleep, I use my phone for Youtube videos. 
>> But I don't watch it, I just listen. 
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