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I've been to Australia and Bangkok. Bangkok went to Hua Hin as a honeymoon destination. Because I was in the early stages of pregnancy, I couldn't enjoy it. I was suffering from morning sickness and had to stay in a pool villa. I remember it as a trip that was not worth the money. In Australia, I went to Tesmania and it was a leisurely and beautiful island. My friends studied language and went to school there, but I walked around there alone every day, unable to speak English. I went to the beach, sat, listened to music, played with passing dogs, said hello to the residents and cats who lived in pretty houses, and went into pretty stores to look around. I went there in my late 20s, and back then there were no English translators and it wasn't the era of smartphones, so I had to use a dictionary or electronic dictionary. I wasn't good at English, so it was frustrating to order when I was hungry, but it was also fun. I went to the gym at my friend's university, and I became frien

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Thank you for this Eliana, 
Having new experiences in life, makes you appreciate the opportunity you had.
I hope that you will be able to go to other countries again, this time with confidence because of your ability to speak English.
Aki~


I've been to Australia and Bangkok. Bangkok went to Hua Hin as a honeymoon destination.
>>> CORRECT!

Because I was in the early stages of pregnancy, I couldn't enjoy it.
>>> CORRECT!

I was suffering from morning sickness and had to stay in a pool villa.
>>> CORRECT!

I remember it as a trip that was not worth the money.
>>> CORRECT!

In Australia, I went to Tesmania and it was a leisurely and beautiful island.
>>> In Australia, I went to Tasmania which was a leisurely and beautiful island.

My friends studied language and went to school there, but I walked around there alone every day, unable to speak English.
>>> CORRECT!

I went to the beach, sat, listened to music, played with passing dogs, said hello to the residents and cats who lived in pretty houses and went into pretty stores to look around.
>>> CORRECT!

I went there in my late 20s, and back then there were no English translators and it wasn't the era of smartphones, so I had to use a dictionary or electronic dictionary
>>> CORRECT!

I wasn't good at English, so it was frustrating to order when I was hungry, but it was also fun.
>>> CORRECT!

I went to the gym at my friend's university, and I became friends
>>> CORRECT!

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