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Homework-which greeting kind of annoys you?

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I was annoyed when my mother in law greeted to me by phone long time ago.
She said " you won't know even if i died"
She blamed me indirectly way.
She wanted me that I say hello to her often.
I am a not type of person to like talk through the phone.
Although i was annoyed that time but i can understand her.
It's my fault not to ask her health and safe.
So l felt sorry for her.

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Hello!


Thank you for completing your homework! Writing some sentences in English also contributes to your constant practice. Stay positive, work hard, and success will be knocking on your door. Keep up the good work! I believe in you. See you in class!



Regards,

Teacher Lexie




I was annoyed when my mother in law greeted to me by phone long time ago.
>> I was annoyed when my mother-in-law greeted me on the phone a long time ago.
She said " you won't know even if I died"
>> CORRECT.
She blamed me indirectly way.
>> She was indirectly blaming me.
She wanted me that I say hello to her often.
>> She wanted me to say hello to her often.
I am a not type of person to like talk through the phone.
>> I am not the type of person who likes to talk on the phone.
Although I was annoyed that time but I can understand her.
>> Although I was annoyed at that time, I could understand her.
It's my fault not to ask her health and safe.
>> It's my fault not to ask about her health and safety.
So l felt sorry for her.
>> CORRECT!
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