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Are policemen powerful in your country? Why or why not?

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The police in my country have adequate power to enforce their duties and I know their authority is stipulated in a law. Isn¡¯t it natural that enforcement has corresponding power to its mission committed by the public no matter what reasons for it? Anyway, I feel the police have power for the following reasons.
First, I feel the crimes in my society have been always under control, which is the attributable to powerful enforcement of the police in my country. Second, we don¡¯t worry about walking along the street at late night. I thought all countries across the world were like my country. However, after finding out that this is not the case for other countries, I have felt proud of my country¡¯s security. On top of that, story police force has contributed to keeping us the a country where ammunition and weapons are banned. By the way, I like the Korean police because they are not into power over society but have been trying to make their images more friendly to the public.

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Hello Steve,
Thank you for doing your homework. I kind of envy the police officers you have in Korea. Anyway, great job :) 
~ T. Demi ^^
The police in my country have adequate power to enforce their duties and I know their authority is stipulated in a law. 
>>CORRECT!
OR>> The police in my country have sufficient power to carry out their duties, and I understand that their power is defined by a specific law.
Isn¡¯t it natural that enforcement has corresponding power to its mission committed by the public no matter what reasons for it?
>> CORRECT!
Anyway, I feel the police have power for the following reasons.
>>CORRECT!
OR>> Anyway, I feel the police hold significant power, and there are several reasons to support this assertion.
First, I feel the crimes in my society have been always under control, which is the attributable to powerful enforcement of the police in my country. 
>>CORRECT!
OR>> First, I feel the crimes in my society have been consistently under control, which is the attributable to robust enforcement of the police in my country. 
Second, we don¡¯t worry about walking along the street at late night.
>> Second, we don¡¯t worry about walking along the street late at night.
I thought all countries across the world were like my country.
>>CORRECT!
However, after finding out that this is not the case for other countries, I have felt proud of my country¡¯s security.
>> CORRECT!
On top of that, story police force has contributed to keeping us the a country where ammunition and weapons are banned. 
>> CORRECT!
By the way, I like the Korean police because they are not into power over society but have been trying to make their images more friendly to the public.
>> CORRECT!
OR>> By the way, I like the Korean police because they are making efforts to improve their public image by prioritizing their relationship with society over exerting power.
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