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Books are like good memories to me.
Because I liked to read books among them.
I loved the smell of old paper, the sound of someone walking, the sound of turning a book, and the sound of writing.
I don't go now, but I still like books because I like those days.

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Hello Da Hye,

Well done on completing your homework! Your words beautifully capture the nostalgic feelings associated with books. Keep up the great work, and never stop cherishing those wonderful memories. Your love for books is something truly special. Looking forward to our next lesson!

~Teacher Cathy


Books are like good memories to me.

>>CORRECT

OR>>Books are like cherished memories to me.

Because I liked to read books among them.

>>I enjoyed reading books among them because I liked them. 

I loved the smell of old paper, the sound of someone walking, the sound of turning a book, and the sound of writing.

>>CORRECT

OR>>I loved the smell of old paper, the sound of footsteps, the sound of turning pages, and the sound of writing.

I don't go now, but I still like books because I like those days.

>>I don't go there now, but I still love books because I cherish those days.

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