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Is it sometimes okay to give things up?

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Sometimes, we should give up something when we meet something that we can't overcome. Then, we should check our attitude. Through it, we can aim for other successes.

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Hi, Seon!

Thank you for doing your homework!

~T. Divina^^

Here are some things to take note of:

1. Sometimes, we should give up something when we meet something that we can't overcome. 
>>Sometimes, we should give up on something when we think it's something that we can't overcome. 
2. Then, we should check our attitude. 
>>CORRECT!

3. Through it, we can aim for other successes.
>>CORRECT!
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