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What\'s a life experience you\'re looking forward to in the future?

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In advance spoken, I like extreme sports and activity.
I want to try paragliding flying in the sky.
People who have experienced paragliding said that the scenery seen from the sky is so beautiful and unforgettable for the rest of their life.
I want to try scuba diving or surfing in the sea.
I am learning to swim these days, so I have no fear of water and I have more interested in water.
I really want to try surfing, but I don't know if it's possible because I'm not good at move a body.
Lastly, I want to travel around the world by myself.
The country I want to go to now is Iceland, and I want to take a picture that pouring stars and wonderful aurora.

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Hello, Yun! Your love for extreme sports is awesome! Paragliding and the breathtaking sky views must be incredible. Don't fret about surfing; practice makes perfect. Your dream of traveling the world, starting with Iceland, is fantastic. Just keep following your passions, and you'll have unforgettable experiences ahead! See you in our next class! 😊🌍🌟
~T. Jade^^
What's a life experience you're looking forward to in the future?
In advance spoken, I like extreme sports and activity.
>> In advance, I enjoy extreme sports and activities.
I want to try paragliding flying in the sky.
>> I want to try paragliding and fly in the sky.
People who have experienced paragliding said that the scenery seen from the sky is so beautiful and unforgettable for the rest of their life.
>> Correct
I want to try scuba diving or surfing in the sea.
>> Correct
I am learning to swim these days, so I have no fear of water and I have more interested in water.
>> I am learning to swim these days, so I have no fear of water, and I am becoming more interested in water.
I really want to try surfing, but I don't know if it's possible because I'm not good at move a body.
>> I really want to try surfing, but I don't know if it's possible because I'm not good at moving my body.
Lastly, I want to travel around the world by myself.
>> Correct
The country I want to go to now is Iceland, and I want to take a picture that pouring stars and wonderful aurora.
>> The country I want to go to now is Iceland, and I want to take pictures of the starry sky and the wonderful aurora.
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