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My English level test and class

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I had a English level test and class. There are only two levels beginner and upper beginner. So as you can easily guess I was upper beginner. I considered that I attended or not that time I saw some back side of students who were girls. So I paid and attended the first class. Unfortunately, I couldn't find the right person. I felt so tiered. I hope to find next class.

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Hi, Thomas!

I would like to congratulate you for being an upper beginner in your English class. I am proud of you and all of your efforts to improve your skills. I know that being better at English is not your primary reason in going there, however, when you cannot find the person you are looking for, at least, you can go back to the reason of improving yourself in the English language.

I have a few grammar suggestions that can make you better. It is important to home your overall skills until the day you can speak with a 'special person'.

Thank you for your consistency and great effort!

See you tomorrow.

-T. Donna~

I had a English level test and class. 
>> I had an English level test and class. 

There are only two levels beginner and upper beginner. 
>> There are only two levels: the beginner and upper beginner. 

So as you can easily guess I was upper beginner. 
>> So as you can easily guess, I am an upper beginner.

I considered that I attended or not that time I saw some back side of students who were girls. 
>> I considered if I will attended or not that time since I saw some back side of students who were girls. 

So I paid and attended the first class. Unfortunately, I couldn't find the right person. 
>> Correct!

I felt so tiered. I hope to find next class.
>> I felt so tiered. I hope to find the next class.
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