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작성자: 김*우
2023-09-11 2487

회원님의 영작문

Hello.
How was your day?
It's a peaceful day for me while Dr. MJ might feel upset.
That's because there were not too many patients in the clinic in spite of the first day of new weekday.
As you know, I ran out of all energy yesterday, so I need more restoration.
Since my wife and I are supposed to take an annual check-up includes colonoscopy this Wednesday, we should restrict our diet from now.
Hence, my wife recommended that we will eat a steamed chicken with clean soup; Sam-gye-tang this evening.
I think it was a great idea.
It won't interfere with the endocopy because it doesn't have much seasoning, moreover it will make us feel fullness and healthy.
Thinking of dinner, my stomach is growling with hunger.
Meanwhile, since it's not busy today, Dr.MJ and I are doing other works includes administation, laber, tax, and franchise.
What a peaceful day!
After my work at the clinic, I will play with my kids and practice playing the guitar, and ride a bicycle with my wife.
See you tomorrow.

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

HI there, Dr. Kim!

This is one rare peaceful Monday for you. I guess it was because of your sleep. It is good to have a serene day especially at the start of the week because it sets your mood for the rest of the days. Dr. MJ may not feel the same but at least, you can neutralize the condition of your staff and it can motivate them to perform their tasks with ease and perfection.

I wish you well on your annual check up. You are very familiar to the processes of all the procedures so there should not be any discomfort. Of course your recent diet may help you get good results but as we already know it, our eating habits shape our health in the long run.

Spending precious and valuable time with your family is just priceless. Indeed, it was a smooth Monday, overall.

From your homework answer, take note of the correct verb for of 'include'. Also, read the rest of the suggestions. You did a great job!

See you tomorrow.

-T. Donna~

Hello.
>> Correct!

How was your day?
>> Correct!

It's a peaceful day for me while Dr. MJ might feel upset.
>> Correct!

That's because there were not too many patients in the clinic in spite of the first day of new weekday.
>> That's because there were not too many patients in the clinic in spite of the first day of a new weekday.

As you know, I ran out of all energy yesterday, so I need more restoration.
>> Correct!

Since my wife and I are supposed to take an annual check-up includes colonoscopy this Wednesday, we should restrict our diet from now.
>> Since my wife and I are supposed to take an annual check-up including colonoscopy this Wednesday, we should restrict our diet from now on.

Hence, my wife recommended that we will eat a steamed chicken with clean soup; Sam-gye-tang this evening.
>> Correct!

I think it was a great idea.
>> Correct!

It won't interfere with the endocopy because it doesn't have much seasoning, moreover it will make us feel fullness and healthy.
>> Correct!

Thinking of dinner, my stomach is growling with hunger.
>> Correct!

Meanwhile, since it's not busy today, Dr.MJ and I are doing other works includes administation, laber, tax, and franchise.
>> Meanwhile, since it's not busy today, Dr. MJ and I are doing other work including administration, labor, tax, and franchise.

What a peaceful day!
>> Correct!

After my work at the clinic, I will play with my kids and practice playing the guitar, and ride a bicycle with my wife.
>> Correct!

See you tomorrow.
>> Correct!

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