¹«·á ·¹º§Å×½ºÆ® ¹Þ°í °­»çÆò°¡ ³²±â¸é 1,OOO¿ø ÄíÆù Áï½Ã Àû¸³!

Ȥ½Ã »çÀÌÆ®¿¡¼± ãÁö ¸øÇÑ ±Ã±ÝÇÑ Á¡ÀÌ ÀÖÀ¸¼¼¿ä?
³²°ÜÁֽŠÀ̸ÞÀÏÀ» ÅëÇØ ´äº¯ µå¸®°Ú½À´Ï´Ù.

¹®ÀÇÇϽг»¿ëÀÌ ¹®ÀÚ·Î ¹ß¼ÛµÇ¿À´Ï
¿¬¶ôó¸¦ ³²°ÜÁÖ¼¼¿ä.
¾÷¹«½Ã°£ ¿ù~±Ý ¿ÀÀü9½Ã~¿ÀÈÄ6½Ã
(Á¡½É½Ã°£ ³·12½Ã~¿ÀÈÄ1½Ã)

¿µÀÛ±³Á¤ °Ô½ÃÆÇ

¿µ¾î ¸»Çϱâ¿Í ¾²±â¸¦ µ¿½Ã¿¡ Àâ´Â´Ù!

ÀڽŠÀÖ°Ô ¾µ ¼ö ÀÖ´Â ¿µÀÛ¹®À» À§ÇØ ÆÄ¿öÀ×±Û¸®½¬ ¼ö¾÷À» ¼ö°­ÇϽôÂ
ȸ¿ø´Ôµé²² ¹«·á·Î Á¦°øÇص帮´Â ºÎ°¡ ¼­ºñ½º·Î, Àü¹® ºÐ¾ß¸¦ Á¦¿ÜÇÑ ÀÚÀ¯ ÁÖÁ¦
¶Ç´Â °­»ç´ÔÀÌ ³»Áֽô °úÁ¦¸¦ ȸ¿ø´Ô²²¼­ ¿µ¾î·Î ÀÛ¼ºÇØÁֽøé,
´ã´ç °­»ç ´Ô²²¼­ ¡®¹®¹ý ¿À·ù ±³Á¤¡¯ °ú ¡®´õ ³ªÀº ¿µ¾î½Ä Ç¥Çö¡¯À¸·Î ±³Á¤ÇØÁÖ´Â
¼­ºñ½º ÀÔ´Ï´Ù.

Homework

ÀÛ¼ºÀÚ: ±è*´Ô
2023-09-11 2565

ȸ¿ø´ÔÀÇ ¿µÀÛ¹®

I have lost my transport ticket in Paris.
Because my jacket¡¯s pocket had a hole.
My ticket might be get out of my clothes.
My second son have experienced like me in sanfrancisco . The ticket was one day pass.
Sadly he stopped his traveling .
Because he can¡¯t control his mind.
It¡¯s too bad he spoiled traveling because of the small things.

°­»ç´ÔÀÇ Ã·»è±³Á¤ ³»¿ë

Good morning, Ms. Sunny!
There are certain things that are unavoidable but this kind of experience, losing your ticket, passport, or even your luggage can make or break you. In your son's experience, it became a traumatic experience for him. I hope he will have the courage to see the world again.
See you later
Aki~

I have lost my transport ticket in Paris.
>>> CORRECT!

Because my jacket¡¯s pocket had a hole.
>>> CORRECT!

My ticket might be get out of my clothes.
>>> My ticket might have slipped out of my jacket,

My second son have experienced like me in sanfrancisco . The ticket was one day pass.
>>> My second son has the same experience as me in San Francisco. The ticket was a day pass.

Sadly he stopped his traveling .
>>> Sadly he stopped traveling.

Because he can¡¯t control his mind
>>> CORRECT!

It¡¯s too bad he spoiled traveling because of the small things.
>>> CORRECT!


¹øÈ£ Á¦¸ñ ±Û¾´ÀÌ °ø°³ »óÅ µî·ÏÀÏ Á¶È¸¼ö
132130 What would happen if all of the world¡¯s computers suddenly... ¿¡*¹Ì ¿Ï·á 2023-11-02 1
132129 What do you think are the most dangerous jobs? ½Å*¼· ¿Ï·á 2023-11-02 5334
132128 homework ±è*¸° ¿Ï·á 2023-11-02 2
132127 HOMEWORK: Please write a short paragraph about ¡°Do you listen... ¾Ù* ¿Ï·á 2023-11-02 1
132126 What is the most important sense for you and why? ¼Û*¿ì ¿Ï·á 2023-11-02 3481
132125 Homework ·ù*¿ì ¿Ï·á 2023-11-02 2998
132124 Cover Letter as final version ¼Û*Áø ¿Ï·á 2023-11-02 5
132123 How do you think transportation will develop or change in the... ½Å*Á¤ ¿Ï·á 2023-11-02 4214
132122 The effect of the tone ¾ç*¿¬ ¿Ï·á 2023-11-02 3866
132121 Survey ±Ç*Á¤ ¿Ï·á 2023-11-02 2
132120 Have you ever said ¡®no¡¯ when you really wanted to say ¡®yes¡¯? À±*¿ø ¿Ï·á 2023-11-02 7
132119 What kind of invitation would you surely decline? and why? ÀÌ*ÅÂ ¿Ï·á 2023-11-02 3495
132118 Homework ½Å*È­ ¿Ï·á 2023-11-02 3083
132117 Homework ½Å*È­ ¿Ï·á 2023-11-02 5420
132116 Homework ½Å*È­ ¿Ï·á 2023-11-02 3543
132115 How important is communication in your work? ÀÌ*ÅÂ ¿Ï·á 2023-11-02 3434
132114 Homework Á¤*ȯ ¿Ï·á 2023-11-02 4
132113 Generally, are you good at speaking? How can you say so? If not,... ÀÌ*ÅÂ ¿Ï·á 2023-11-02 4020
132112 Is there something fun that you haven¡¯t been able to do yet? Á¶*Áö ¿Ï·á 2023-11-02 0
132111 1.Nov 2023 ±è*Á¤ ¿Ï·á 2023-11-02 1

HOW TO USE IT?

[¸¶ÀÌÆäÀÌÁö > ¼ö¾÷ ³»¿ë º¸±â > ÇнÀ ͏°´õ > ¿µÀÛ±³Á¤ ¹öư Ŭ¸¯]

¼ö¾÷ Ƚ¼ö¸¸Å­ ¿µÀÛ±³Á¤ °Ô½ÃÆÇÀÌ »ý¼ºµÇ¸ç,
Áö³­ ³¯Â¥¿¡µµ °Ô½Ã ÇÒ ¼ö ÀÖ½À´Ï´Ù.

ÁÖ5ȸ ¼ö¾÷ : ¿ù 20ȸ ÀÌ¿ë °¡´É
ÁÖ3ȸ ¼ö¾÷ : ¿ù 12ȸ ÀÌ¿ë °¡´É
ÁÖ2ȸ ¼ö¾÷ : ¿ù 08ȸ ÀÌ¿ë °¡´É
01
±³Á¤ ³»¿ëÀº ÃÖ´ë 1,000byte±îÁö ¿Ã¸± ¼ö ÀÖ½À´Ï´Ù.

÷ºÎ ÆÄÀÏÀº ¿øÈ°ÇÑ Ã·»èÀ» À§ÇÑ Âü°íÀÚ·á·Î »ç¿ëµÉ »Ó,
ÆÄÀÏ¿¡ ´ëÇÑ Ã·»èÀº ºÒ°¡´É ÇÕ´Ï´Ù.

¾÷·Îµå °¡´ÉÇÑ Ã·ºÎ ÆÄÀÏÀº ÃÖ´ë 2mb±îÁöÀ̸ç,
÷ºÎ ÇÒ ¼ö ÀÖ´Â ÆÄÀÏ Çü½ÄÀº ´ÙÀ½°ú °°½À´Ï´Ù.

¹®¼­ - PDF, TXT, DOCX,
À̹ÌÁö - JPEG, PNG, GIF
02
Àü¹® ºÐ¾ß¸¦ Á¦¿ÜÇÑ È¸¿ø´ÔÀÌ Á÷Á¢ ÀÛ¼ºÇÑ ±Û¸¸
÷»èÀÌ °¡´ÉÇϸç,

¿Ã·ÁÁֽбÛÀÇ °­»ç´Ô ÷»èÀº 24½Ã°£ À̳»¿¡
¿Ï·á µÇ´Â °ÍÀ» ¿øÄ¢À¸·Î Çϰí ÀÖ½À´Ï´Ù.
03
ÇÏ·ç °Ô½Ã °¡´ÉÇÑ ±ÛÀº 3ȸ±îÁö À̸ç,
Á¾·áµÈ ¼ö¾÷ÀÇ ¿µÀÛ±³Á¤ °Ô½ÃÆÇÀº
ÀÌ¿ëÀÌ ¾î·Á¿î Á¡ ¾çÇØ ºÎŹ µå¸³´Ï´Ù.
04